Jin_Kazuya420
Disciple 高弟
Heaven or Hell...anything is decided by destiny - Hanzo Hattori
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Post by Jin_Kazuya420 on Aug 5, 2013 18:13:53 GMT
This thread is all about poetry rather you write your own work or just simply like to read it feel free to post. Heres a poem that I wtote a while ago
Its called I'm expressing my feelings to a girl by poem"
I see her every day
She usually walks my way
I want to talk to her but don't know what to say
She's the prettiest girl around
I am love bound
I thought I didn't have feelings for her anymore
But my feelings for her were stronger than evr before
And if the reader of this poem is the girl of my dreams
You are my will to live without you I have no reason to breathe
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zafina
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Post by zafina on Aug 6, 2013 9:11:55 GMT
Here's one I wrote about my little monsters  Scarlett says it’s time for bed But Imogen cries til her face is red It’s half past eight it’s way too late The bottle’s empty and so is the plate No more milk, no more food No hitting your sister, cos hitting is rude No bashing your head on the back of the chair No biting the ears off your teddy bear Try again, is it time for bed? ‘Yes’, Imogen says as she nods her head Walks by herself to the bottom of the stairs Waves na-night as she kisses the air Mummy takes her off up to bed But Daddy sees Scarlett asleep instead Curled up snoring on the leather chair Another child to carry upstairs When Scarlett says it’s time for bed Imogen cries til her face is red But both are only barely awake And sleep is an adventure they’re about to take |
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xXxFR33D0MxXx
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"Two can keep a secret.....if one of them is dead....."
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Post by xXxFR33D0MxXx on Aug 6, 2013 21:45:53 GMT
Wow wonderful poetry  if ever begin writing poems again i'll post some of my own ^^ |
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Post by Jac on Aug 7, 2013 4:06:44 GMT
Those were both good guys!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2013 12:37:11 GMT
This thread is all about poetry rather you write your own work or just simply like to read it feel free to post. Heres a poem that I wtote a while ago Its called I'm expressing my feelings to a girl by poem" I see her every day She usually walks my way I want to talk to her but don't know what to say She's the prettiest girl around I am love bound I thought I didn't have feelings for her anymore But my feelings for her were stronger than evr before And if the reader of this poem is the girl of my dreams You are my will to live without you I have no reason to breathe Is this about Jun? |
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Jin_Kazuya420
Disciple 高弟
Heaven or Hell...anything is decided by destiny - Hanzo Hattori
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Post by Jin_Kazuya420 on Aug 7, 2013 17:27:08 GMT
No surprisingly. Its about this girl I used to like in high school
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2013 17:31:32 GMT
Oh i thought you told me you were going to do poetry about Jun.
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Jin_Kazuya420
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Heaven or Hell...anything is decided by destiny - Hanzo Hattori
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Post by Jin_Kazuya420 on Aug 7, 2013 17:38:51 GMT
I will I am waiting till others post their poetry
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Jin_Kazuya420
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Post by Jin_Kazuya420 on Aug 7, 2013 17:42:21 GMT
zafina that was really cool and cute I can just picture it happening in my head you're really good @freedom you should write some poetry again I bet you are really good aince theres a thread for it you might as well XD
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2013 21:11:01 GMT
I will I am waiting till others post their poetry You want me to don't you? |
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Jin_Kazuya420
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Heaven or Hell...anything is decided by destiny - Hanzo Hattori
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Post by Jin_Kazuya420 on Aug 7, 2013 21:16:30 GMT
You can if you want
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2013 21:17:48 GMT
I am not good at poetry I'll try and figure something out.
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Jin_Kazuya420
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Heaven or Hell...anything is decided by destiny - Hanzo Hattori
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Post by Jin_Kazuya420 on Aug 7, 2013 21:32:30 GMT
It doesn't havw to be your own just share a poem you like
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2013 21:34:34 GMT
It doesn't havw to be your own just share a poem you like The thing is though is that I don't particularly like poetry. It's impressive but it's a little to romantic for my liking if you catch my drift. |
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Post by hundredgunner on Aug 7, 2013 21:35:39 GMT
I wandered lonely as a Cloud That floats on high over Vales and Hills
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Jin_Kazuya420
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Heaven or Hell...anything is decided by destiny - Hanzo Hattori
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Post by Jin_Kazuya420 on Aug 7, 2013 21:37:27 GMT
Poetry is not all romantic alot of poems I have readand some I wrote are sad.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2013 21:38:25 GMT
Poetry is not all romantic alot of poems I have readand some I wrote are sad. I have never seen poetry that is not romantic I mean it ever. |
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Jin_Kazuya420
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Heaven or Hell...anything is decided by destiny - Hanzo Hattori
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Post by Jin_Kazuya420 on Aug 7, 2013 21:54:54 GMT
Than you must have not seeen alot of poetry
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2013 21:57:13 GMT
Than you must have not seeen alot of poetry Nope i haven't i remember reading them in my education years and at the Art centre. |
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Jin_Kazuya420
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Heaven or Hell...anything is decided by destiny - Hanzo Hattori
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Post by Jin_Kazuya420 on Aug 7, 2013 22:15:21 GMT
ah I see you should read more poetry XD
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if ever begin writing poems again i'll post some of my own ^^
